Wednesday, March 9, 2016

Final Portfolio

Gabriel Evans
Dr. Kaschock     
English 102
11 March 2016
The Inspirations of a Chef
The image of a chef has been engrained into our heads as a foul-mouthed, tough, knife-wielding, lunatic who’s constantly struggling for a breath of air. A chef is seen as a master of his craft; The steward of the art of gastronomy. They are driven, unstoppable and sometimes quite crazy. These images have been painted accurately by cooking shows and movies where chefs are glamorized for their skill, their personality, and their drive to be the best in the world. In my experience, many of this reigns true. The chefs I’ve had the pleasure of working for have not only displayed their drive to be the best in the world in the truest sense, but they actively make efforts to differentiate themselves from others in the industry. This differentiation is a prime motivator to improve and one of the most important sources of inspiration for the many great chefs in the culinary industry that we will be exploring.
         A chef comes to realize their goal in the industry from both experience and failure. In the documentary “Spinning Plates,” The chef of three Michelin star restaurant “Alinea” in Chicago, Grant Achatz, realized his goal after leaving “A temple of gastronomy, Charlie Trotters Restaurant.” He commented on his experience after leaving, “I didn’t leave there on great terms… Charlie told me ‘If I leave this restaurant that I was nobody and I wouldn’t amount to anything.’ As a young cook, that’s crushing. He was probably the most influential person in American gastronomy ever to this point. And knowing me, I wanted to crush that” (Levy 44:45). For chef Grant Achatz, this crushing exchange of words prompted him to seek higher achievement. Drawing upon a similar experience, when I was fired from my first restaurant job as a busser, I was crushed and disappointed in myself. I felt I hadn’t performed to the degree with which I was expected to. This was partly due to my lack of adaptability and my manager’s failure of training me in the proper manner. This similarly crushing experience benefitted me, though, when I started my second restaurant job. I used the experience of getting fired due to underperformance to ensure that I would exceed the higher standards expected of the prestigious restaurant with which I now worked, and I excelled because of it. In a similar experience if excessive failure, chef Mogan Anthony comments on his worst day as a chef, “The [Village] Social was open for 2 weeks and we had a packed house. The line was packed and I went to the walk-in to grab some ingredients and every shelf fell in front of my face. At the same time, Allison (the manager) was looking for me to greet guests. I was covered in sauces and all of my ingredients were now useless. I was so close to breaking down” (Evans 5). Failure is a constructive measure for future success. Every chef experiences it, and those who are able to use it to grow stronger can find great success.
Once a chef establishes their goal and method of differentiation, they draw upon different forms of inspiration to achieve their goal. Some chefs are raised with a culinary background. For example, my interviewee, Chef Mogan Anthony, describes his most important culinary experience as when “[My mama] would take me to the open-air markets and we would pick ingredients for dinner. I would walk around smelling all the spices. That was my first exposure to food and it has grown from there” (Evans 8). This important cultural moment influenced Mogan’s cooking from here on out. Today, he uses ingredients and methods from his hometown market and his mama’s kitchen. It’s safe to say that growing up with a strong culinary influence has a profound effect on a chef. For me, it proves true. My father has cooked every meal in our household for as long as I can remember. He differentiates his dishes and incorporates new ingredients as an inspiration each season. During winter, he focuses on russet potatoes and grains like quinoa and lentils. In summer, he uses fresh fruits and vegetables from farmer’s markets like heirloom tomatoes, basil, and fruits like blueberries and papaya. I have since taken after his methods. I even push him to try new things based on my experience at my restaurant job. From using grape seed oil in place of olive oil and sautéing a Jean-Georges version of a tuna burger on Brioche with Chipotle mayo and red leaf lettuce, my father and I have discovered totally new things in the kitchen and it inspires us each and every time to out do our previous creation. 
Chefs also find inspiration from the intersection of culture and food. This intersection has such a profound impact that it affects nearly every accomplished chef. Chefs use their culture to influence not only how they cook, but how they think about cooking. In certain instances, a chef realizes the importance of their culture after the realization of the lack of it in their life. This was the reality for Teresa Corção, a Brazilian chef, who only discovered the importance of incorporating heritage ingredients after she saw the employees of her restaurant doing something that hurt her pride. “She remembers the ‘Frenchified’ food the employees of O Navegador would prepare for themselves at staff meals” (Franklin 42). To her, “Depending on how you look at it, it was either fusion or confusion.” It took the realization that she and her employees were trying to do things with food that had no affiliation with the pride of their culture to discover the importance of a Brazilian root called Manioc. This root is a traditional Brazilian staple that was used by inhabitants of Brazil for over 1000 years, but with the influx of international ingredients, has since been abandoned. After discovering the versatility and benefits of Manioc, she now uses this root in almost all of the cultural dishes on her menu. Corção is now world-renowned for her use of the Manioc root. She has used it to revitalize households and communities in Brazil through the power of education in cooking and has formed an initiative to revitalize similar cultural ingredients in her home country. In my experience, coming from a Jewish background has greatly influenced how I think about food. From the first days of my life that I can remember, I recall the matzo ball soup my grandmother and father would make together. I always enjoyed the opportunity for each matzo ball to taste different than the next. I also recall the yearly “Break Fast” dinner after a day of fasting on Yom Kippur. An entire table of bagels, freshly smoked lox, cream cheese, vegetables and more would always, without fail, make my taste buds salivate. I am proud of my heritage and its wonderful food.
         Besides culture that influences a chef’s identity, people also have a profound effect on the moral and creative character of a chef. Chef Mogan Anthony was greatly influenced by his mother and by his mentor, Chef Jean-Georges, a world-renowned chef with over 30 restaurants worldwide and my current employer. He describes Jean-Georges as “similar in background [to him]. He’s from France but uses Asian flavor a lot. I do the same, yet I am from Asia. I love how he mixes ingredients from different cultures like I do” (Evans 9). This inspiration from a legend like Jean-Georges helped Mogan understand his importance in the industry. A chef needs a Jean-Georges figure to guide them in the right direction. Both of these chefs have helped me realize the importance of food more than anyone. I’m fortunate to have been able to see their talent in action. It inspires me to try new things and find my niche at a time where I never thought it would be a possibility. These influencers are an integral part of differentiating yourself and finding inspiration as a chef.
It’s apparent that sometimes the culinary profession can be too overwhelming, though. Between the long hours, the dangerous working conditions and the physical and mental strain it puts on your body, it not only devastates certain chefs, but their families as well. For chef François De Mélogue, this became so apparent that his marriage began to deteriorate because of it. After being married for five years, the chef’s wife said of him, “[he] was more married to the kitchen than to her” (Mélouge 105). What was even more tragic is that he said after the fact, “I wasn’t sad: I still had my kitchen, which was all I had ever wanted or needed.” This is a scary reality some chefs may face. In this profession finding a balance is absolutely essential. Chef Phil Cousineau, Mélogue’s mentor, describes his struggle as “soul loss.” “The joy I once felt for the business had disappeared, and my work began to seem meaningless. I noticed how no one around me liked the hours they worked, how some people hid their woes in womanizing, drinking, drugs, or fragile marriages” (Mélouge 106). Amazingly, I have seen this happen in my own experience at the restaurant I’ve worked. I’ve seen managers come and go based on the highly stressful responsibilities and 60-hour plus work weeks. My last general manager would often sleep on the couch in the bride’s suite at least once a week. He recently left the restaurant because he even thought the job was too much for his health. This example is only one of a long grocery list of examples of those who find the profession too overwhelming. The culinary industry isn’t for everyone.
         Being a chef is otherwise a very stimulating and rewarding career. Chefs find satisfaction in making people happy with their food. Angela Billings of Worchester Vocational High School says, "As a chef or caterer," says Angela, "you'll feel fully alive, and you'll know the tremendous satisfaction of making people happy" (Geshelin 1). Chef Mogan Anthony feels similar about the profession. When asked if he loves what he does, he responded, “I absolutely do. I couldn’t think of a better job to have. It’s fulfilling, rewarding and delicious” (Evans 10). Being recognized for your hard work is also a significant motivator to becoming a great chef. Accolades such as Michelin stars and James Beard Awards are what make world-class chefs constantly seek to improve. The pride a chef takes in their cooking is a serious matter. Working for a world-renowned chef has helped me to understand this phenomenon. My employer, Jean-Georges operates over 30 restaurants worldwide, and some of them have 3 Michelin stars, the highest accolade in the industry. To maintain the integrity of his name, he and his team make sure that every employee at his restaurants, including me, understand the pride he takes in his watch. He’s not alone in seeking to demonstrate this importance. One of the greatest chefs in the world, Thomas Keller of the French Laundry and Per Se, said in the documentary “Spinning Plates,” “It has its moments, but at the end of the day, you go home elated. You're excited about coming back tomorrow even though you worked 16 hours and you gotta be up in 6 hours from now. And it's that kind of lifestyle that feeds who we are” (Levy 41:35). Being a chef is absolutely one of the most awe-inspiring professions there is and it truly takes perseverance and a little bit of crazy to love it as much as some do.
         It’s easy to say that being a chef is not an easy job, nor a simple identity to claim. Without truly experiencing the energy of the kitchen and the high pressure of the industry that you come to appreciate why these “crazy” individuals do what they do. Through the troubles they experience, to the delight they bring to people’s faces every day, there are negatives and positives to the profession. This begs the question, why are these individuals so enamored by this seemingly overwhelming and destructive profession? I think it is born in certain individuals. The constant need to outdo oneself and overachieve is a definite possibility. Additionally, these individuals seek to be constantly engaged. Being on your feet all day is rewarding for some because it’s a physically and mentally stimulating activity that few professions, a chef being one, can provide. I think some chefs also strive for the recognition of being one of the greatest. Above all, though, you have to love food. The love for food is always the most important motivator for being a chef. Some chefs will see these motivators as reasons for being great, while others may not, but they can always appreciate the creations they concoct on the line every night. That’s where the real magic is.



Works Cited
Evans, Gabriel. “Interview with a Chef.” Telephone Interview. 27 Jan. 2016

Franklin, Sara B. "Manioc: A Brazilian Chef Claims Her Roots." Gastronomia.
University of California Press, Sept. 2012. Web. 1 Feb. 2016.

Geshelin, Hanna Bandes. "Chefs: Cooking Up a Dream Career." Career World, a Weekly Reader Publication.
Scholastic, Nov. 2000. Web. 2 Feb. 2016.

Mélogue, François De. "The Evolution of a Chef." Gastronomica.
University of California Press, June 2004. Web. 3 Feb. 2016.

Spinning Plates. Dir. Joseph Levy. Spinning Plates Movie.
Chaos Theory, 24 Oct. 2013. Web. 2 Mar. 2016.


         

Monday, March 7, 2016

Final Peer Responses

Peer Response from 14 January 2016
My experience with sports is completely opposite of yours and Ryan's. I, in no way, shape, or form, have any affiliation with NCAA sports or national sports. My interests lie elsewhere. With that being said, I was able to easily understand the importance of your history with lacrosse. It shows through well that you have created an important connection with the sport. I think that you should focus on finding a way to identify yourself as an athlete that you are comfortable with in the future. 
I did want to comment on some grammar and language issues that I noticed in your writing. Very small stuff like using the correct form of "too" is the one error I found in line 11. Another aspect to improve on is replacing the word "things" with another, more descriptive noun. The last aspect I'd like to bring to your attention is the last paragraph. The sentence structure was a bit confusing to me and I wasn't quite able to understand what you were discussing in it. I hope this helps just a little bit. 
Overall, I enjoyed the impact that lacrosse has had on your life and I hope it continues to positively influence you. 
This was a well written prompt, Matthew. What I loved about it is that it made me want to go out and explore the wilderness myself. Your words were descriptive and poignant, your examples were informative and interesting, and your writing was overall well done. I especially liked Syndrome's quote from "The Incredibles". You get extra points for that. I saw just a few grammatical errors that I'd like to point out to you. Your use of commas seems to be misused at times. Especially in the second sentence. There were also a few issues with the way you added apostrophes. For the most part, though, I really enjoyed reading this prompt. I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future. 

Peer Response 21 January 2016
Like Carly, I also enjoyed the beginning of your story. I thought it represented your feelings well and served as a good intro to the story you were about to tell. The bulk of your story felt cut short as well. I wish you had extrapolated your experience a bit more. I think the comparison with your homecoming to the one at your new school was interesting to add. I would also find it hard to assimilate to that if you didn't appreciate that culture. I think you also should have talked about how senior year was the best year of your life. You talked about why it was bad; I'd like to hear why it was good. 

I loved the way this prompt was developed. You had a good beginning to the story, a good explanation, and a well-done conclusion. You explained well what made you feel like an outsider. I also liked that you varied your sentence structure. Some sentences were detailed and others were short. This made reading your prompt easy and well-paced. 
I noticed a few grammatical errors, though. In the sentence "It could be at work, at school, at a club, at anywhere. The place where I felt like an outsider was at my sport" I think you should replace at with in. Even though it breaks the parenthetical structure rule, I still think it would be a good fix. I also think you should not use the word "very" as often. Lastly, just do a quick proofread before you post to ensure there are no easy errors like using "person" twice on the third line. 
Overall, this was a well-written response. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. 

Peer response 26 January 2016

I also found it weird that in an interview situation you have to take a negative approach. It does seem like an interesting approach to take, but it makes sense. You can get more information that way. I hope your interview goes well. I am also going to add my thoughts to each of the interview questions below. 
How many siblings do you have? - This question doesn't leave any room for extrapolation. It warrants a one-word answer. 
What type of relationship do you have with your siblings? - Add examples to this so it's not too overwhelming for the narrator. "Good?" "Bad?" "close?" "distant?" could work. 
How have your older sibling/siblings helped you grow up? - Great question!
How do you think your other siblings look at you being the youngest? - maybe add the phrase, "did they help or hinder your development?" how so?
How would it be different if you weren’t the youngest? - Also a good question
Did your parents give you special treatment since you are the youngest? - you could also add, "if they didn't, who was the favorite?'
If your older siblings have helped you grow up, how do you think you've helped them grow up? - Awesome question!
What is the most important thing you've learned from your older siblings without them realizing? - or "what is the most important thing your older siblings have taught you" is a good question, too. 
Do you think you act differently now because you are the youngest? - good question
Would you change being the youngest? - also a good question. 
Hopefully, you'll get some good responses to these questions. 

In response to the tip that you found most useful, I also feel that we often come off too aggressive when we have an opposing opinion, so this is an important tip in my opinion, too. The trick is actually following it in practice. The way the things we say comes across is often what gets in the most trouble. I also never thought about your point about TV interviews being with multiple people. You bring up a good point. I think the reason this is is because entertainers are more used to being interviewed than people who are not in the business. 
Below I will put some comments on each of your interview questions. 
1. Why did you decide to be a business major? - Good question. You might want to add a direction for them to extrapolate on. 
2. What other majors were you debating on going into, and what made you choose business over them? - This is a good question as well. 
3. Before entering college, had you thought about what it would be like to be a female working in a traditionally male-dominated field? - Add "If so, how did you overcome this potential obstacle?"
4. So far in your college experience, have you ever felt like your experience as a female business student has differed from that of a male's? If so, how? - Good question. 
5. What are the top three feelings you have about being a female pursuing business? Confidence, nervousness, curiosity, etc.? - Love this question!
6. How do you think today's business world is currently evolving in regards to the genders? Positive changes, negative changes, etc.? - Also love this question!
7. What would you say to current high school females considering pursuing a business degree? -Nice!
8. What has been your best experience so far as an undergraduate business student? Do you think your gender affected this in any way? - Love both questions. 
9. What about your worst experience? Did your gender play a role in that at all? 
10. How do you think women in business are currently perceived in today's society? - Awesome!
I hope your interview goes well. These are great questions!

Peer response 17 February 2016

I really enjoyed reading this. For a college student like me, this hits home so well. I can relate to this so well. I think the piece improved as it progressed. The beginning was less compelling than the things you said in the end. One of my favorite lines is, "You see a difference in what you were six months ago to what you are now, and it is seemingly more mature." It really shows the impact that college has on us. I'm not sure who you are referring to by saying "it" in the last part of that sentence, though.
I really enjoyed this passage, though. Thanks for writing it. It made me think of my college experience so far. 

The message in your piece is the most important part. "It does not matter what order you were born, what does matter is that you are family, and family is always there for each other. Even if you can’t be there during every problem they still know that you care and just want the best for them." Finishing off with this line is what makes the piece. 
This piece also reminds me of the song "You Can't Always Get What You Want" by The Rolling Stones. It's true that once we have one thing we want what we can't have. Especially when interacting with kids, they don't realize this inconvenience and they expect everything possible. My brother does the same thing. So in the end, do you like that you are the oldest? Or do you regret this? I hope you appreciate that you are because it's better than being the youngest in my opinion. 
I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. 

Peer response 25 February 2016

Wow, such an interesting topic you chose! I really enjoyed learning about this. The introduction really drew me in and it never made me bored either. I loved learning about this trait that you have. I have a few suggestions about how you can improve on it. I think one of the first things you can do is talk about what happened after that dinner conversation after the second paragraph. Go in between the research narrative and your personal narrative. Maybe talk about the doctors visit you might have gone on when you discovered this highly sensitive trait you have. Another thing you can add is an account of a famous individual with this trait. It would be a really cool way for the reader to relate to the story. Plus, everyone loves hearing cool facts about celebrities. Another thing you can do to make your essay better is to add an example of when you either used this trait to your advantage or when it hindered your ability. This can really help the reader appreciate your condition even more. Another thing you might want to consider adding at the beginning of your story is identifying words that describe this identity you have. There are so many directions you can go in with this. As far as research goes, I'd like to see you add some more examples of how it's confused either in the workplace or in real life. 
I love this topic. I think it's a really interesting topic that many people will enjoy learning about. I think it would be great if you let your story shine through a little more. Additionally, adding a celebrity example would also be a good idea if you choose to explore that as well. 

Peer Response 3 March 2016

You did some great research, Abigail. I especially enjoyed learning about the difference between independent children in China and Canada. I can totally see where those values come from in each respect. In western culture, it is perceived as negative to be introverted, whereas in China it is a beneficial attribute. I never thought of the comparison until I saw the research, though. This will be an interesting addition to your essay. I think one thing you can do with the males vs. females High Sensitivity is exploring another comparison besides sensitiveness. I see the reason you chose to include it, but I think more examples would make the research more interesting. With that being said, I think if you had to choose between using one of the two pieces of research, I would definitely choose the first. It's more interesting and better connected to the rest of your essay. 

Peer Response 3 March 2016

Since Abigail gave you some useful comments on argument, I thought I'd go ahead and fix your grammar mistakes. Below is a revised version of your essay for your consideration: 

The debate on how your family’s birth order has been something that we have let take over our personalities. (I would rework this introductory sentence.) In an article by Dorothy Sailor, “Influences on Sibling Relationship”, she mentions studies done on how birthing order has an effect on each person in the family. The results of her finding are as follows: Firstborns are seen as the ones in power, the middle child is seen as the forgotten one and the youngest is seen as the baby. These findings are what everyone has come to see (I’d use a different word than “see”) because they are the typical stereotypes in a family. Also, Sailor’s work states how the age and spacing of siblings have an effect on relationships. It has been proven that as the age gap becomes greater between siblings, the enjoyment of power also becomes greater. However, if the child is prepared by the parents for the arrival of their younger sibling, then they will become more protective of them rather than become jealous of them (Sailor). It has also been said that the oldest has specific traits, such as being adult-like, presenting themselves better, and also being more in control of their actions and words. I have noticed this within myself when I would sit with the adults at parties instead of playing with the children. These are not the only things I am faced with by being the older sibling. People also expect certain traits from me because I am an older sibling. I am constantly correcting my sibling because I have the power is one example. My goal has always been to be the best I can be because I have two younger people looking up to. This became a challenge when I decided to live with one parent instead of the other.

Divorce has an effect on the couple but if the couple has children it can affect them as well. Fighting over who gets what and especially who gets the children can drastically change a child.


With the experiences my stepmom and I shared, and the many studies and stereotypes of first born and children of divorce parents these things become a way of life. However, George Nitzburg finds a way to prove these things to be wrong. In a recent study, Nitzburg found that birthing order does not matter at all. As for the children from divorced families, it depends on how the children interact. He had found that if the children interact more after the divorce, then they are more likely to weaken their relationship once they become adults (Nitzburg). Because of the world we live in today we have just agreed with the stereotypes that people faced in the past and not go back and question what was really going on like Nitzburg had done. I have lived in the stereotype that I have to be in power. I am the third parent to my siblings, and I have to be a nurturer because that is what society told me I have to be. Through experiences I have faced I have come to realize that I am different than this. It doesn’t matter what order you were born in; What really matters is that you are a family.  



Final Read Responses

Read/Response due 12 January 2016
            The three readings had similar themes in common. Arguing that they focused on the concepts of identity and different people’s effect on culture would be an easy statement to make. “Captain America in a Turban” is a perfect example of the effect of a surprising take on a cliché and how the public reacted to it. The first surprising aspect of this story was not only the reaction to the public from the seemingly dissimilar association of an “American” hero, but the subjects own fears of being judged for his stature. This shows that prejudice is first and foremost judged by appearance. What surprised me, however, is the positive reaction the subject received for his gestures. This goes to show that we have a more accepting culture than we might make it out to be.
            In the story “Faking It”, we learn about the easiness at which it is to create a false identity with the use of the internet. What amazed me about this story is the trust that people were willing to give this young law professional despite his age even after it was uncovered that he was well below having the qualifications needed to practice law. What this shows about identity and culture is that people are really able to be whoever they want with the right means. It was described well with the quote, “If they were using the Internet to experiment with their identities, it was probably because they found their old identities inadequate. If the Internet was giving the world a shove in a certain direction, it was probably because the world already felt inclined to move in that direction. The Internet was telling us what we wanted to become.”
            In the third reading, the main takeaway is our stereotypical culture. The story revolves around a black man whose life is greatly affected by the color of his skin and the perception of who he is by others, even if that doesn’t reflect his personality at all. What this shows us is that we live in an inherently racist and stereotypical world. Conditions have been improving, but there is still a lot to be done.
Read Response Due 18 January 2016
These three pieces of literature covered a diverse set of problems. It’s difficult to find where the literature connects on the surface. On the surface we read literature about the importance of smiling, we watched a video about the differences between men and women and we watched a video about the idea of seeing the positive in day-to-day millings.
I’d like to ask the question of what brings us to think the way we do? How has the human race evolved such that women are societally expected to smile more than men? Why is it that women are supposed to hold their tongue more so than their male counterparts? Above all, why do people inherently behave like they are better than everyone else? I know I’m guilty of it.
I can offer one way that I have started to heal the last societal problem stated. I try to use yoga and meditation to center my focus on what’s important and only positive. Sometimes I catch myself doing the opposite, but I’m on the fast track to improving.
With regard to the other burning questions, our patriarchal society is crumbling before our eyes. What was once a social norm for the mother to raise children and tend to the home while her husband worked is no longer a reality. There are more young female professionals in the work force than ever before. I know these reforms are long over due. We’re starting to see a domino effect of change, though. In our lifetime, our society will develop faster and better than ever before, and I can’t wait to watch it happen and facilitate its success.
Week 3 Read Response & Interview questions
            There were a few tips that I found useful in this article. Some seemed unnecessary, but I found that some drew good inspiration for me. My two favorite tips are tip five and tip ten. Tip five describes the importance of starting with basic questions, so the narrator becomes more comfortable answering deep questions later on. I remember Brandon from Humans of New York uses this to get an interviewee to open up to tell deep, pressing stories very quickly. He’s able to touch upon the most important stories in people’s lives and he does it by starting simply and gradually moving towards deeper questions. Another tip I liked was the tenth. It describes how talking about a person’s physical characteristics is a good way to get them to open up about their personality. Most people have a hard time describing other people without getting a head start in some way as it seems. I think this article has some useful information on interviewing and I’m sure I can use some of these tips in my interview as well.
Interview questions:
1. What defines you as a chef?
2. Tell me about the moment you realized this was the profession for you?
3. What doubts did you have about the profession? What did you outweigh those doubts with?
4. Tell me about the best day you had as a chef?
5. Conversely, tell me about your worst day as a chef?
6. Is there a single chef you look up to? If so who are they and why?
7. Where do you draw your inspiration from?
8. Has your culture influenced your cooking? If so, what aspect of it?
9. What has your profession taught you about life/people/culture/anything impactful?
10.  Do you love what you do? Tell me what makes you feel this way in three words.
11.  What is your greatest creation? Will it change the world?
I interviewed a chef I used to work for. He and I became close friends at the restaurant he ran while I worked as a busser there. I was more interested in the food he cooked than the job I was supposed to do.
1. What defines you as a chef?
a.     Probably my culture and my specials. I like to mix ingredients from the different places I’ve been to and I think my customers like that too. I like to think I still have so much to learn. I discover something new every day and that defines me well.  
2. Tell me about the moment you realized this was the profession for you?
a.     I was 16 and I was asked by a chef in Singapore to come on as an apprentice. I was so overwhelmed by the opportunity to learn and make some quick cash. My family was so poor and I wanted to have some freedom. I learned so much from my first restaurant job. I think the first thing I fell in love with was the spices.
3. What doubts did you have about the profession? What did you outweigh those doubts with?
a.     My mom was always very supportive of my passion. I was worried about the long hours and high stress, but I was always good at managing that. This just came so naturally to me that I never really worried about it. Now I have a beautiful family and I have free time to spend with them so I think it all turned out pretty well.
4. Tell me about the best day you had as a chef?
a.     The best day I had was the day Joe came to me. I had been working at Jean-Georges, a man you know quite well, and he and I talked about doing something on our own. I knew it was my chance at doing something great and I jumped at the opportunity.
5. Conversely, tell me about your worst day as a chef?
a.     I try not to think about this one. For you, I will tell it. The [Village] Social was open for 2 weeks and we had a packed house. The line was packed and I went to the walk-in to grab some ingredients and every shelf fell in front of my face. At the same time, Allison (the manager) was looking for me to greet guests. I was covered in sauces and all of my ingredients were now useless. I was so close to breaking down. That’s only part of the story. I don’t even want to tell about that night because it brings back so many bad memories.
6. Is there a single chef you look up to? If so who are they and why?
a.     I think Jean-Georges is amazing in my eyes. You could probably answer this question for me, Gabriel. Anyway, I’ve had the amazing pleasure of working closely with him at his most amazing venue. He and I are similar in background. He’s from France but uses Asian flavor a lot. I do the same, yet I am from Asia. I love how he mixes ingredients from different cultures like I do.
7. Where do you draw your inspiration from?
a.     Where I come from and what I learned during my childhood mostly. I now create new dishes from my wife Seleste’s family. Her grandma makes the BEST bone broth. I’ve taken inspiration from that and I have a few books from Seleste’s home country where I try out new ingredients I find.
8. Has your culture influenced your cooking? If so what aspect of it?
a.     My culture is probably the biggest influence of my cooking. I cooked with my mama early on. She would take me to the open-air markets and we would pick ingredients for dinner. I would walk around smelling all the spices. That was first exposure to food and it has grown from there.
9. What has your profession taught you about life/people/culture/anything impactful?
a.     This industry is tough! If you’re not fast, dedicated, passionate and somewhat crazy don’t do it. I’ve seen people have mental breakdowns, scream at people until they can’t talk, suffer from addictions due to stress, all of it. I’ve also noticed over the years with many employees that you can usually judge if an employee will be a good fit on the first day they are on the floor. Some people are cut out for this work and some are not.
10.  Do you love what you do?
a.     I absolutely do. I couldn’t think of a better job to have. It’s fulfilling, rewarding and delicious.



I was so surprised by the thoughtful and well-developed response I received from my interviewee. He really went above and beyond to provide worthy responses. It took a long time for him to get back to me. I reached out to many people about it, but only one responded.
Read Response due 1 February 2016
The most difficult part of citing sources for me is remembering correct parenthetical citation for my sources. I also find difficulty in incorporating a quote so that it flows with my writing. A lot of the time the information I want to use is in a different tense or form of writing than I want. I think another area of difficulty as well is actually finding good information to cite. Not all information is useful and not all information is true. It’s sometimes difficult to find work that can be incorporated well into your writing.
I am for sure guilty of these citing practices. I think the most apparent that jumped out at me was not always giving a quote a proper introduction. I also was unaware that when you parenthetically cite a source you have to cite the source with the same first word as in the work cited page. That’s a good tip to know to ensure that my sources are useful to the reader.
Annotated Bibliography
Works Cited

Franklin, Sara B. "Manioc: A Brazilian Chef Claims Her Roots." Gastronomia.
University of California Press, Sept. 2012. Web. 1 Feb. 2016.

This article explores the intersection of a gastronomic staple in Brazil and the discovery and resurrection of this staple through the work of a chef in Brazil. In the article, we discover the historical impact of the root “Manioc” and its discovery by chef Teresa Corção. Once Corção discovers the root, she becomes obsessed with its application in her food. The Article also explores her roots as a chef. She discusses how “she remembers the “Frenchified” food the employees of O Navegador would prepare for themselves at staff meals—rice, beans, and béar- naise, for example” (Franklin 42). She also discusses her upbringing as a child and its affect on her future profession, stating, “I was always watching and was fascinated at the gift and choreography of kitchen work. I remember sitting on a stool at a big table in the old house, looking at this lady with a headscarf killing a chicken in the back of the house, and she cooked with the blood. I was fascinated by the transformation of food.” (Franklin 41). This article is the perfect example of inspiration in the culinary world and how culture greatly influences creativity and passion.
Geshelin, Hanna Bandes. "Chefs: Cooking Up a Dream Career." Career World, a Weekly Reader Publication.
Scholastic, Nov. 2000. Web. 2 Feb. 2016.

“Chefs: Cooking Up a Dream Career” discusses the experience young culinary professionals experience when going to culinary school. The article provides us with the admiration that the young professionals have for their newly-found career. One student explains her love for cooking as making her “feel fully alive, and [knowing] the tremendous satisfaction of making people happy." The article describes the love for cooking “like a bug that you catch… "Once it gets into your blood, you'll never be the same again”. The main study of this study is the discussion of how to prepare for a career in the culinary arts. It is often stated in the article that “cooking is not for everyone”. Unlike most careers, being a chef requires you to use all five senses. Quotes from this article will be useful when describing why people choose the profession of being a chef.

Mélogue, François De. "The Evolution of a Chef." Gastronomica.
University of California Press, June 2004. Web. 3 Feb. 2016.
In contrast to the other cited articles above, this article discusses how a chef evolves from his love of the kitchen to his eventual hatred of the kitchen because of the sacrifices he made for it. The author states, “Chefs…had the highest rates of divorce, suicide, and alcohol abuse. It was a hard life for a chosen few. Oddly enough, his words [his teacher, LeBorgne] excited me.” This love of the pressure of the kitchen developed as he spent six to seven day weeks in his kitchen and it eventually led to the divorce of his first wife. It didn’t seem to phase his love, though. The chef even wrote, “I wasn’t sad: I still had my kitchen, which was all I had ever wanted or needed.” However, he eventually realized his mistake of being married to his kitchen. Later in his career, he realized “It didn’t seem right. There had to be a way to balance work and family. I no longer wanted to sacrifice my life for the restaurant industry.” What is significant about this work is the eventual realization that the culinary arts is a profession that takes everything from you and gives little in return. Sometimes this reality is too much for some, and for others it is liberating.
Read Response due 15 February 2016
After looking at the 20 tabs of grammar mistakes, I found that there were only a few that I might be guilty of using in my work. The most apparent grammar mistake I use is the “vague pronoun reference”. I know that I have made this error before and I’m sure I still do. Another mistake I often make is the “misplaced/dangling modifier”. This grammar mistake I find to be tricky because it can be easy to start writing a sentence without a sense of direction and once the sentence is complete it may not be worded in the best way. I’m sure another grammar error I’m guilty of committing is an “unnecessary shift in tense”, and, in addition, an “unnecessary shift in pronoun”. Both of these occur when you are writing a sentence too fast.
After reading the first 3 paragraphs of my paper I found multiple grammar errors and I feel a bit disappointed in myself for doing that. I expect more out of work.
After reading Zadie Smith’s essay, I commend her for her effort in relating her personal experiences with logical thought. She makes the story seem compelling and better understood by using these two ways of thinking. The picture is vivid and well understood. I think in order for her to be able to convey her message, even more, she should talk more about the other side of her story. Exploring different points of view is a useful way to get a point across.
Read/Response 7.5
This essay gave me a lot of guidance on how to incorporate a personal narrative into my story. Sarah Smarsh used the example of bad teeth as a way to prove so much about society and its people. One specific way I enjoyed was the interweaving of Pennsatucky’s character in “Orange is the New Black”. What she accomplished here is more than just stating specific examples of why Pennsatucky has a harder life than that of her well-toothed compatriot. She described the place she came from and the way it affected her in such a way that it didn’t seem obvious or too direct even after stating it multiple times. She also interwove her narrative quite well. The way she described how fortunate she was for having good teeth, but that she grew up in a poor family showed a balance between her upbringing and, say, Pennsatucky’s.
            I’d like to use the way she interwove her narrative in my essay. My work doesn’t have any of my voice in it. To me, its more of an argument as to where chefs draw inspiration from. It’s not supposed to be an argument in that way. My voice and connection to cooking needs to be heard. I think this was a great example of showing how to make that known.
Read/Response Due 29 February 2016
Karen Swallow Prior asserted the importance of reading to make us more moral in an effective, yet predictable way. The first thing she accomplished was to create an argument for reading to become more moral by citing multiple news outlets who originally brought the issue to light. She used other people’s ideas to illustrate her point. She then cited studies that furthered her point. She concluded that “spiritual reading” is what makes as more moral people. Her points are hard-hitting and well conceived. One of my favorite quotes is about the impact of good literature, “What good literature can do and does do -- far greater than any importation of morality -- is touch the human soul.” Prior introduces her sources well and ensures that his source’s opinions are important to furthering her thesis.
            One thing I would have liked to see more of is her personality narrative. Yes, she talked about how certain texts impacted her, but if she had expanded upon just one that would have been even better.
            The way this piece compares to Said’s is how she uses her sources. I think she introduces them better and they have more of a positive impact on her thesis. At times, it seems she lets her sources do the talking, but her point is still heard as well. I think Said used more difficult language due to his scholarly audience, whereas Prior ensured that her points were to the point and easily understood.


Final Prompts

Prompt #1 Due 13 January 13 2016
Beyond my control:
1. I am a man
3. I am from the city
6. I am Jewish
7. I am more of an American than I am anything else
In control:
2. I am a student
4. I am lucky to be here
5. I am safe and comfortable (most of the time)
8. I am a foodie
9. I like bars more than house parties
11. I am addicted to coffee
12. I am someone who does not get addicted to things easily 
13. I am unsure of how to fill the rest of my life. 

I am addicted to coffee. I consider this to be one of two external forces that I am addicted to. I like to think that I am not addicted to anything, but at this point I have to admit that I’m addicted to coffee and to the world of technology. Technology is a whole different conversation that I’m not ready to go into right now, so I will focus on coffee exclusively. The world of coffee consumption has played a minor role in my life until the day I got hired as a barista at a restaurant near my house. The restaurant I work at prides itself in using La Colombe coffee. For the coffee connoisseurs reading this they would know that La Colombe is well regarded in the Philadelphia area and so is its founder, Todd Carmichael. I came to appreciate the history I had with La Colombe when I moved to Philadelphia this fall. After learning everything there is to learn about coffee and working towards my goal of perfecting the perfect latte, I started seeking out other baristas for advice. I have spoken to scores of baristas over the last year. With that I learned about the culture of coffee as well. From the different shops, to the various drinks and brewing methods and the up and coming roasters, I came to appreciate the culture just as much as I appreciated the drink. I think now I’m more addicted to the culture of coffee than the actual substance itself. Yes, my body appreciates its caffeine in the morning, but my soul appreciates the act of going to the warm, lively coffee shop and enjoying the coffee drinking experience. I get to interact with young, like-minded people and I always get something new. Whether it be a new Ethiopian pour over roast, or the best rated latte in the city. What coffee accomplishes for me is more than just a good feeling. To me, it is a focal point of those who seek knowledge. We use it as a catalyst for learning and high functioning. I have always had a thirst for knowledge and learning all there is to know about coffee has enabled me to appreciate the craft and culture of coffee. It is also the most consumed commodity on a day-to-day basis. If over a billion people use it every day, there must be something beneficial about it. I don’t see myself ceasing to frequent every coffee shop in the city any time soon. I’ve already visited over 20. Even if my bank account can’t sustain it, I will always find a way. 
Prompt #2 Due 20 January 2016
Describe in great detail a moment when you rejected some element of your family culture and that you refused to act in a way that was expected of you.
Soon after we moved from New York City to the suburbs of Westchester, NY my mother got sick. She was hiking in the woods without the proper protective clothing and a tick attached itself to her and slowly started feasting on her flesh. Ticks can be easily avoided by checking yourself after being in the woods. Being so new to this way of living, my mother neglected to do that. Just days later, she came down with a terrible sickness known as Lyme disease. Lyme disease puts you into a bed ridden state for weeks and can even cause permanent nerve damage. My mother could have taken antibiotics to combat the illness, but instead she turned to a nutritionist named Dina Khader, who told my mom there was another way to rid herself of the illness. My mom used a juice cleanse to rid herself of the illness. She was so surprised by the effectiveness of using food to cleanse your body that she turned her focus to how food can impact your health in other ways. My mom discovered her bible. A book called “Eat Right 4 Your Type” by Dr. Peter J. D’Adamo. My mother read this book countless times. She even created a cheat sheet of what foods my brother, myself and my father were supposed to eat based on our blood type. Her interest developed into a passion into a way of life faster than I can scarf down an 8oz, foot-tall hamburger.
The rest of the family didn’t exactly see the same vision that my mother had. All we saw is the foods we loved slowly being phased out of our house. First, it was the delicious muffins that my brother and I enjoyed each week, next it was the chocolate chip pancakes my dad could no longer make us on Saturday mornings, then the amount of meat was cut down in our diet by at least 75%. Slowly, but surely, the delicacies we were afforded in our household went from slim-to-none. As growing boys without the regard for eating natural, whole foods we despised our mother for doing this to us.
I began to tell all my friends how much or a terrible woman my mother was. In my arrogance, I thought my mother was neglecting me from the sweetness of life. In reality, she was saving me from it. In order to get my fix of the food I loved, I would go over to my friend’s houses and eat all their junk food. I would order soda right in front of my mother when we went out to eat and I would order my burgers with extra bacon while my Jewish “kosher” mother watched in horror as I ate the cured and deep fried belly of a once intelligent pig on top of an over-sized, fat-laden hamburger. This attitude continued for months until my mother started to make deals with me to eat healthy. She offered me $100 dollars in the beginning of junior year to not eat gluten or dairy for 60 days so I can see that it was food that was making my nose all stuffed up. I took her bet and stayed true to it, and in the end I benefitted from it. I was no longer sneezing and sniffling all day. I came to realize that for all of those years my mother was teaching me valuable lessons about how to respect my body and the foods that I consumed. I have come to appreciate what she has taught me since the weeks after contracting Lyme disease and successfully ridding it from her body faster than anyone she has ever known. Though I still don’t believe in not eating night shade vegetables (I love tomatoes and will never stop eating them), or only eating a few ounces of meat a day (a thick hamburger once every few weeks is good for the soul), I do believe in what my mother preaches now and I constantly apologize for throwing a tantrum after she took my Halloween candy away.
Prompt #7 Due 17 February 2016
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You look around your bustling kitchen and realize its crumbling before your eyes. The line cook yells in your ear,
“hey, plate these dishes”
Staring at the vivid colors of the fire-roasted lobster with pomme frites and shaved basil, you come to realize its starting to stare back at you.
“Try to snap out of it”
you say to yourself.
“Focus”
 you think internally.
your mind is racing in three different directions.
“Get it together”
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 Later in the evening the line is swamped. The manager approaches you with a face so red you think its going to pop right in yours. The buttons are about to burst off his shirt. He tells you he’s just heard complaints from three tables waiting over 45 minutes for their food. You yell to your expeditor,
“where’s table 27’s food?”
No response.
You turn back to the manager and give him a look of hopelessness. This might be the last night of your career.
“get it together”
/
At the end of the service you gather your team in a circle in front of the line and talk about performance. Words are exchanged, knives are picked up, glasses are shattered, and chefs walk out. You look at the remaining chefs in disbelief. You say to them “guys”,
“get it together”
/
You get out of your car at half past midnight. Wife and kids are fast asleep. This is the fourth day in a row you haven’t spent more than 15 minutes with any of them. Walking into the bedroom you can’t wait to take your shoes off. Feet aching and lower back soar, you stumble in the shower and get down, grab your knees and breathe. You say to yourself,
“get it together”
/
After three glasses of Makers Mark you stole from the bar at work, your feet stop aching and your back stops feeling soar. You finally feel okay again. This is the only time you feel this way. You crawl into bed and she turns around and looks at you. In a hushed voice she says,
“get it together”
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Prompt #7.5 Due 24 February 2016
            The first paragraph of my essay seeks to illustrate an introduction about why people become chefs. I think it accomplishes this without giving away too much information. Something I think I should do with the paragraph, though, is getting rid of the quotes and instead establishing an identity for a chef. I think not everyone has the same opinion on who a chef is. With my former experience in the industry, however, I can provide a sound example in my essay for what a chef is.
My second paragraph explores the origins of different chefs. Their culinary background and their childhoods are the main source of inspiration for them. What I’d like to add to this paragraph is a personal story about my father.
            In the third paragraph I explore the intersection of culture and cooking. The example of the Manioc root shows how important it is to include your culture into your food. I think it might not be a bad idea to go back to my interviewee and ask him more about he includes his culture into his cooking.
            The fourth paragraph talks about the support needed in order to become a chef. Not everyone can live with one. Finding the balance between the kitchen and the rest of your life sometimes doesn’t work as well as expected. I think I can interweave a personal example about working over the Christmas break.
            Overall, the essay is underdeveloped in multiple ways. From the fact that I only use a first person narrative once, to the lack of identifying what a chef is, there is a lot to be done. I think some of the ways I can improve the essay is by explaining what draws a chef to the profession. Right now my essay only explains the negative. I’d also like to examine the art of cooking. My personal experience also must be heard more than it is right now. I have so much to say on this subject and right now my voice isn’t heard at all. That needs to change.